The Fault in Our Stars Introduction and Conclusion

What did the author do that was most effective?
I really like the introduction as he introduces the characters in a scenario that I could relate to and the words and thoughts that is used is something that I would say and think. The author mentions that Hazel hates going to those support group as she feels depressed during those sessions. The story continues as she finally attends a session and notices a new kid in the group that she really think is super good-looking. After exchanging multiple witty intriguing dialogues, they decide to go out on a movie which she never does. It made it really personal in a sense where I could imagine myself in the persons shoes as well as picture the situation in my head like in "real-life". The introduction states really clearly what problems the main characters have and what their feelings are towards it which catches the audience attention.

As for the conclusion, I really like how the author did not have a cliche ending like many books with the 2 "love-birds" getting what they want. Instead Augustus dies due to a deterioration of his condition leaving Hazel all alone which made it more painful as Hazel only realize later that she loved Augustus so much more. The author gives a brilliant capturing of the bitter sweet moment between them as just before Augustus is about to die he shares with her that "getting hurt in this world is inevitable, but we do get to choose who we allow to hurt us, and that he is happy with his choice." Augustus hope that she agrees with him and at the end of the novel Hazel says "she does".

What tool or approach did he take?
Very purpose informative  and you can get the main idea easily.
As for the conclusion it reiterates her problems which now is for the better or worse and that is for us as readers to choose. The author also leaves a quote that we can ponder on.

Let's give it a go!!!

So my topic for the OP-ED essay is from the Free-write topic which is still on Food but I’ve taken it in a different direction. Instead of addressing the lack of importance or thought students give to taking great meals at the right time in the right amount; I’ve decided to talk about an issue on food that most of us are familiar about. That Exigence is on the Word of Wisdom, specifically the issue if we should or should not consume drinks with caffeine in it. You would probably have heard the phrase, “I need an energy drink right now” many times but wait, is there any of such drinks on campus? BYU had this policy of a caffeine-free campus many years back and this issue of wanting such beverages has now been a huge hype to all BYU members at this day with recent occurrences of Coca-Cola products containing caffeine found in vending machines.

BYU presidents before and present definitely has its own reasons for upholding this policy but why is there such a big conflict of response to this policy. This policy might not have been a problem in terms of the feedback or response given back in the 1900s or early 2000s but it is at this moment a very controversial topic. This could be due to the increase in trends and popularity of caffeinated beverages and energy drinks to the current rising generation.

Now let’s ask the question of “why such a policy?” or “what’s so bad about having caffeinated products”? On the other hand, questions like “Is it such a big deal?” or “What’s the big fuss about this policy?” do arise from other BYU members who feel that such a policy is inspired and meant for our day. I personally agree with the policy for its good purposes but it still comes down to the personal preference of each individual who are more than welcome to share their opinions. I drink caffeinated drinks too but do I need to get them from campus? Does the policy have to change to fit my desires? I’ll let each of us answer this question ourselves.        

20 MINUTES OF FREE WRITING!!! Hmmmm... Never done that before....

So what does people on BYU campus who picks up The Universe wants to read? Great question, not too sure what people would like to see being argued. Just thinking about it, Food is such a big part of people's life. More so for students! 

I mean students probably would skip meals just to complete an assignment that is due the very minute or their appetite is loss due to stress. More so, some students cannot find time to eat something due to the many activities going on in their life. On the other hand, some students gorge themselves with food or constantly eat throughout the day as a means of a stress reliever. They find themselves over-eating to take their mind away from what’s overwhelming them. There are however, some students who do find a great balance in their student life and the everyday essential need of eating as a source of energy to their daily activities.

Scientist and Food nutritionists have definitely given many insights on the importance of having not just a good but great diet! There are thousands of articles to justify how eating rightly affects the alertness and strength of an individual positively and how bad eating habits or practices can have long-lasting and damaging consequences.

Let’s also not forget the spiritual food that we need daily! 

It's ME!

Well, I come from a family of 7, me being the 4th of five children which is HUGE in SINGAPORE! and yes, Singapore is where i'm from, BORN and RAISED!

A little about Singapore: It's a small country hence being called a City and an Island as well! To make it more VISUAL, If you look on the World Map, Its a DOT! Yeap! with about 5.5 million people on it! That's almost twice the population of UTAH!

OK, something about me: My life is practically split into 3 very different worlds!
1st: I'm a sports Fanatic!!! Tennis, Soccer, Basketball, Badminton and Table Tennis! Yes, I Play them ALL!!!

2nd: I'm also really ACTIVE in the Arts! I grew up practicing Ballet and am now on course to get into the Contemporary Dance Minor. I play the Piano and love to Sing.... terrible at remembering the LYRICS though! Cooking is also a form of Art for me #gottaLOVEtheCulinaryArt!

3rd: I call this my outside world i'm in. Having zero contact with anyone or anything, I'm drawn into this 'world' through reading, watching movies, computer games and just chilling! Oh' How I love them all!!!

OK... My life revolves around this 3 'worlds' BEFORE and AFTER... but mostly IN BETWEEN any form of 'school', assignments included.

Some other interesting facts about me: I serve 2 years in the Military (Mandatory in Singapore) as an Infantry Sergeant which allowed me to handle a range of FIREARMS such as a Rifle, Light Machine Gun, Heavy Machine Gun, Grenade Launchers and Missile Launders. Now that's WAY COOL!!! I also serve as a Full-time Missionary in the Belgium/Netherlands Mission which gave me the opportunity to learn Dutch. Hence, becoming trilingual with English and Chinese being the other 2 languages that I speak.

LAST but definitely not the least, I love the Gospel of Jesus Christ in my Life and of course my Family..... A LOT!!!

That's all for now=D